198 words
How could this ever happen?
The empty dreams, the lost lover's passion.
You look in my direction but your eyes don't see me.
I've never felt so lost and lonely.
What happened to the love you shared with me?
I didn't hear, I couldn't see.
Has your love turned to hate?
Can it mend? Is it too late?
Your love has turned away from me.
The slightest chance isn't meant to be.
The memories lie shattered on the floor.
I hear your footsteps walking to the door.
My arms hang loose at my side.
I'm too numb to even cry.
I hear you softly close the door.
Your love is lost forever more.
Now I'm left to face an empty day.
A flame has died and gone away.
The darkness has come and is here to stay.
My soul is cold and has lost its way.
A single tear rolls down my cheek.
My head spins round, I can not speak.
My heart shatters, I lose control.
The sweet memories my lover stole.
I yell out loud in great despair.
My life comes crashing down everywhere.
Farewell the love I lost today.
Dreams may come, come what may.
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"Cukup tidak?" tanyanya sambil menyodorkan kertas, "198 kata."
Aku menghitungnya. Tidak lebih dari 216 kata.
Sejak awal dia memang ingin mencoba.
"Cukup."
Kening ku berkerut setelah membaca judul,
"Sad Goodbye? Untuk aku?"
"I don't dare!"
"Oh..."
Titipan Salam
Pertamaaaaaaaaaaaa
wah klo ditambah 2 huruf lagi bisa genap 200 deh
oleh: ario dipoyono | November 20, 2006 12:10 AM
FF lagih??
btw, masa ga boleh sering2 niup "suling" seh? khan enaaaakkkk... hahahahahaa...
btw, lagi.. vi3 nekad ikutan 3 lomba.. :D
oleh: vi3 | November 20, 2006 04:35 AM
Ehmmm lomba-lomba....kayakna asyik nih...
temanya lagi apa nih?
ga seru lah kalo sedih2
oleh: Pengamat Trend | November 20, 2006 05:38 AM
sempat2nya ngitung, hehehe... keren deh semua tulisan kamu! boleh belajar??
oleh: |a | November 20, 2006 01:28 PM
la baru tahu, yak, kalo tulisan Elsa itu emang keren... hallah hihihi moga sukses teruuuuuus :)
oleh: Qky | November 21, 2006 05:28 AM
wah kurang jauh mbak. ntar bisa kena pinalti dosen...lho?! hehehe *dasar student*
oleh: hani | November 21, 2006 05:30 AM
"You look in my direction but your eyes don't see me."
hahaha... pasti juling nih :))
oleh: agusset | November 21, 2006 08:08 AM
kok gak ada artinya sih? hehehehehehe
genapin jadi 250 kata saja, nanggung kalo cuma segitu.
oleh: tukang nggedeblues | November 22, 2006 06:21 AM
mbak...tambahin dua huruf lagi dong -d-e- hihihihi
btw...de ngungsi nih mbak. main yah ke pengungsian
oleh: mama rafayra | November 24, 2006 10:22 AM
mbak saya baik2 saja kok =)
oleh: bintangjatuh | November 24, 2006 03:59 PM
bagaimana caranya biar bisa ngitung dengan akurat seperti itu? setiap kata pasti bermakna apalagi sampe diitung getu... sok tahu mode on :d
oleh: danu | November 27, 2006 12:27 PM
Walah aku ga ngetung lho mbak, baca wae he he pa kabar? semoga baik-baik saja dan tetap semangat!
oleh: Uare | November 27, 2006 03:57 PM
kenapa 198?...
oleh: aprian | November 29, 2006 03:15 PM
angka 198 dan 216, keduanya kelipatan sembilan. aku suka angka sembilan!
oleh: dodi | November 29, 2006 03:53 PM
apa artinya mbak? he..he..
wah emang tulisan mbak sa selalu bikin orang terbengong dan berkata 'dasyat' :)
oleh: ririn | November 30, 2006 09:42 AM